Is this sentence okay: It was a pleasure meeting everybody and I had such an amazing

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Is this sentence okay:

It was a pleasure meeting everybody and I had such an amazing time on my trip to NYC that I'm moving to NYC early next year.
 

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Yes, but I'd suggest dropping the "and" and making it two sentences.
 

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I'd also suggest that you drop the second "to NYC", and replace it with "there".
 
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