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    rewrite letter

    i would like to write a letter to the company that they are good working with us long time and we respect their loyal business with us .
    now we want to tell them that they have outstanding amount xxx. and there is problem in the balance . we will check and we will inform . mean while u pay what the balance amount.

    i want to write this in good enlgish

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    Re: rewrite letter

    My business experience in India tells me that such communications are not made in plain modern English. Very old-fashioned courtesies and circumlocutions are customary. Therefore you would be better off asking an Indian business person than us. Otherwise you may risk offending your customer or client.

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    Re: rewrite letter

    Although probus has given you probably salient advice, I had already answered your question in your other thread HERE. Please don't post the same thing twice. It wastes our time.
    I have closed this version of your thread.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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