The tense should be present: "graduates". Your punctuation could use some work.
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I dont know what kind of tense used for "graduate" here and why
"Tim doesnt seem to be particularl fond of his school but, of course, when he declares that the very day he....(graduate) he'll make a bonfire to burn all his books, this is some sort of axaggeration"
Anyone could help me? Thanks
No, its my homework so I cant change the puctuation :D. Yes, I've made mistake "Thank you so much" :)
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