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    My winter holiday . Please correct

    to start ! winter vacation I made many interesting things .. I was out with friends .I was skating with one of my best friends .. I talked to my girlfriends chatting late .. I bought several books interesting like first love written by Turgenev , refugees signed fate ' refuge ,, way to light ', the angel of darkness , parallel destinies . I played with snow. I spent the holidays with family. it was fun .. I played a lot on the computer .. I looked at many Christmas movies especially at home alone :) ..

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    Re: My winter holiday . Please correct

    Welcome to the forum.

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