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Your post is far too long for us to deal with. Please click on Edit Post and remove Essay #2 from your post. Click Save. Then start a new thread for Essay #2. Please give that essay a title like "The US is run by a commercial dynasty - Essay" or something similar.
Note that I have changed the title of your first post to a more relevant one.
All these posts should be in the "Editing and Writing Topics" section of the forum, not "Ask A Teacher". I have moved this one to the relevant section.
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