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    #1

    my thesis title

    Hello,

    Can you please check a title for my thesis?

    1)Analysis of the execution of dangerous goods transportation order by chosen logistics operator

    or the other option:

    2) Analysis of the execution of client's order for dangerous goods transportation by chosen logistics operator


    Thanks for your response!
    Sandra

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    #2

    Re: my thesis title

    It's not clear from either of them what your thesis is actually about. Can you explain the topic of your thesis in a different way?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: my thesis title

    I would phrase the title llike this:
    An analysis of the execution of transportation of dangerous goods by a chosen logistics operator.

    'Client's order' is understood.

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    Last edited by tedmc; 14-Jan-2015 at 04:41. Reason: added 'the execution'

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    #4

    Re: my thesis title

    I find the "execution of transportation of". Why not just "An analysis of the transportation of dangerous goods ..."?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: my thesis title

    Perhaps that is to distinguish between the planning and execution stages of the transportation process.

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    #6

    Re: my thesis title

    Ted, why don't you wait until the OP has had a chance to answer ems's post #2?
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 14-Jan-2015 at 10:09.

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