Yes, but I prefer the first.
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He had tethered his dog to a tree outside the window, and it whined persistently.
Can I move the word "persistently" here?(as below example)"
He had tethered his dog to a tree outside the window, and it persistently whined.
1. Is it correct?
Polyester, you have been a member long enough to know that a better title would have been it whined persistently.
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