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  1. B45
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    Short paragraph: We are so proud to have you wearing our Face Guard during your comp

    Short paragraph:

    We are so proud to have you wearing our Face Guard during your competitions! And it looks like the Face Guard fits you perfectly. Good luck with the rest of the season and let's hope you have a speedy recovery. Please let us know if you need anything else, like additional elastic straps for the Face Guard or a set of our new Knee Sleeves and we'll ship it to you on the house. Thank you so much for sharing the news article with us and we are happy to do business with you anytime.

    Is this professionally written well?

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    #2

    Re: Short paragraph: We are so proud to have you wearing our Face Guard during your

    Is this you own writing, Batman?

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    #3

    Re: Short paragraph: We are so proud to have you wearing our Face Guard during your

    "Any time" should be two words.

    Are "Face Guard" and "Knee Sleeves" proper names? Is that why they are capitalized?

  2. B45
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    #4

    Re: Short paragraph: We are so proud to have you wearing our Face Guard during your

    Yes Rover_KE. How is it?

  3. B45
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    #5

    Re: Short paragraph: We are so proud to have you wearing our Face Guard during your

    Yes they're proper names. I will correct any time.

    Anything else I should change?

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