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    not willing to share with her/to give him.

    Joey brings her iPad to her cousin's house to play.
    His cousin's daughter want to play the Ipad but Joey not willing to share with her/to give him.

    Joey was frustrated after her cousin scolding her.

    How should I say it? "Not willing to share with her" or "to give him"?

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    Re: not willing to share with her/to give him.

    "Willing to share" means agreeing to both people using it together or passing it back and forth after a short time. "To give it to him" may not mean sharing, just passing the Ipad to him.

    Some other things to watch is that you have written with a bad mix of verb tenses. Try writing it all in the past because it seems this was a past event. I'm not sure if Joey is a boy or girl - I'll assume boy.

    Joey brought his iPad to his cousin's house to play.

    His cousin's daughter wanted to play with the Ipad but Joey was not willing to share with her ..or.. was not willing to give it to her.

    Joey was frustrated after his cousin scolded him.
    Last edited by jawgar; 16-Jan-2015 at 05:19.

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    Re: not willing to share with her/to give him.

    You are also mixing up your possessive pronouns.
    If Joey is a male, it's HIS cousin, not HER cousin.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: not willing to share with her/to give him.

    Quote Originally Posted by jasonree123456 View Post
    Joey brings her iPad to her cousin's house to play.
    His Her cousin's daughter wants to play with the Ipad but Joey is not willing to share it with her/to give it to him her.

    Joey wasis frustrated after her cousin scolding scolds her.
    You have used 'her' and 'his' to refer to Joey and 'him' to refer to the daughter - get your pronouns right
    You started with the present tense, then changed to the past tense. - check your tenses

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