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    #1

    can anyone corect this topic plz thanks

    well hi this my first topic in your website,im so happy finding a god way that will
    help me improve my english language in short amout of time,but this is result of challenge
    to get into a job that use english ,thats what push and motivate me to became a new membre
    here,to be honest i really need this job and hope i can acheive my goal .ok thanks thats it for today.

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    #2

    Re: can anyone corect this topic plz thanks

    I can't figure out what the topic is.

    Quote Originally Posted by nicestudent View Post
    Hi! This is my first topic on your website. I'm so happy to find a way to improve my English in a short amount of time. I am trying to get a job where English is required, and I hope this website will be helpful to me.

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    Re: can anyone corect this topic plz thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by nicestudent View Post
    well Hi, this my first topic post in on your website. I'm so happy finding to have found a good way that will help me to improve my English language in a short amount of time.

    but This is the result of the challenge to of getting into a job that uses English. That's what pushed and motivated me to became become a new membre member here.

    o be honest I really need this job and hope I can achieve my goal. ok Thanks. That's it for today.
    Welcome to the forum.

    You haven't posted a topic, you've simply posted a post or started a thread.

    Look at my corrections above in red. You must follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark
    - Always capitalise the word "I".
    - Always capitalise proper nouns (English, Italy, Microsoft, Shakespeare etc).
    - Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.

    In addition, you need to work on your use of articles and your use of apostrophes, and you need to check your spelling very carefully.

    Also, please correct the information in your profile. You have said that your current location is Mauritius. That is not correct.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: can anyone corect this topic plz thanks

    thank you sir a lot
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 18-Jan-2015 at 01:21. Reason: removed link

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