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    Company's motto for trade fairs

    Can you check for me this given below company's motto for trade fairs? It will be placed on the special advertising board. I must be sure that it will be completely correct.
    It is going to like be like this:
    "20 years of business experience. We are reliable business partner for hundreds of companies."
    Is it ok.?

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    Re: Company's motto for trade fairs

    You need "a" before "reliable" to make it grammatical. But if may offer a suggestion, it is a bit long for a motto.

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    Re: Company's motto for trade fairs

    A motto/slogan/tagline should be short(preferably in one line), catchy and does not have to be a full sentence.

    How about: Your reliable business partner with 20 years experience.

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    Re: Company's motto for trade fairs

    How about:
    20 years of experience: a reliable business partner for hundreds of companies.

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