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cingsing my writing skills preparingto prepare for the upcoming TOEFL exam, and hope someone can give me advi sesce to further improve my writing skills.
The reading (what reading) states that the AIDS advocacy group (AAGs) (,) tries to help AIDS (’s) patients
more easilyto obtain medicines more easily , providesby providing three methods of support s. However, the lecture refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading (?) claims that major drug
companycompanies should lower the price of AIDS drug. InContrary to this point, the lecture argues that such a method may hinderdiscourage investors from pour money intoinvesting in a company to produce anynew medicines.
Second, the reading suggests that getting the government
engagement intoto buy ingAIDS medicines at ain large quantityquantities can benefit both patients and the major drug company. Nevertheless, the lecture claims that because most poor countries rely heavily on material imports, governments do not have enough money to pay for the drugs.
Third, the reading encourages the manufacturing of AIDS drug carried out in
sidepoor countries which might lower the cost of the drug, and it believes this method can reduce the costs of making the new drug. However, the lecture discredits this method and says such method will produce tintedtainted drug that endanger AIDS patients.
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