Student or Learner
I want to know if the following line is grammatically correct or not -
"Attempting to get a job in Oil and Gas exploration industry has made me realize how ignorant I was about the real life."
I am confused, as I wrote this line just by converting what I thought in my native language, which sometime results in major grammatical error.
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. I still dont know how to write it properly. Would you please rephrase it for me? That would be helpful.
There is nothing left for me to change. (What is "it"?)
Well, you are not doing badly. in fact, your writing is easy to understand. (It is easy to understand what you mean to say even if you don't get it exactly right every time.)