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    An email about cancelling a play date

    The following is an email about cancelling a play date. Could you please let me know how I can improve it?

    Hi ...,


    John is feeling better now. The doctor said high temperature was caused by virus and it's catching.
    I think it would be better if we cancelled this week play date and organised another one for the next weekend just for Alex's safety.



    Cheers,
    ...

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    Re: An email about cancelling a play date

    Quote Originally Posted by MS3330 View Post
    The following is an email about cancelling a play date. Could you please let me know how I can improve it?

    Hi ...,

    John is feeling better now but the doctor said his high temperature was caused by a virus and it's catching.
    I think it would be better if we cancelled a good idea to cancel this week's play date and organised organise another one for the next weekend, just for Alex's safety.

    Cheers,
    ...
    See my suggested amendments above, in red.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 30-Jan-2015 at 08:32. Reason: Missing word
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