milan2003_07
Senior Member
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- Jan 7, 2011
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- Russian
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- Russian Federation
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- Russian Federation
Dear friends,
Below there is a sentence from my technical paper:
"On-time inoculation allows us to decrease the population’s morbidity 1.4-1.7 times or even more, reduce the death rate from influenza and influenza-associated death rate from somatic diseases".
I have a few questions about this sentence:
1) Is "on-time" coorect her? The intended meaning is inoculation given before the beginning (outbreak of the epidemics).
2) Do I need any preposition between "morbidity" and "1.4-1.7 times"? For example, "morbidity by 1.4-1.7 times".
3) Does "influenza-assocoiated" sound fine here?
Thanks
Below there is a sentence from my technical paper:
"On-time inoculation allows us to decrease the population’s morbidity 1.4-1.7 times or even more, reduce the death rate from influenza and influenza-associated death rate from somatic diseases".
I have a few questions about this sentence:
1) Is "on-time" coorect her? The intended meaning is inoculation given before the beginning (outbreak of the epidemics).
2) Do I need any preposition between "morbidity" and "1.4-1.7 times"? For example, "morbidity by 1.4-1.7 times".
3) Does "influenza-assocoiated" sound fine here?
Thanks