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    [Urgent] Help with formal letter writing to a university

    can someone please help me correct my letter? i am international student so my English isn't the best.


    Dear Sir,

    Sorry for the inconvenience, regarding my masters application I submitted in October, because I did not meet the minimal requirements for Melbourne University. I am hoping if it is possible to switch my application from Master of Management to Master of Management (Accounting).

    I genuinely wish to study at Melbourne University not only for its reputation of excellence but they can also provide the best environment for education. I am an international student, studied Bachelor of Business (Marketing) at Latrobe University. Although my oral and essay writing isn’t the best. I am a hard worker and achieve good results. Most of my friends study at Melbourne University, which I admire. I’d really like to have a chance to study in Melbourne University.
    I thank you for your consideration. Should you have any further question, please do not hesitate to contact me.

    Yours Sincerely,
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    Re: [Urgent] Help with formal letter writing to a university

    Dear Sir,

    Re: Switching of Course Applied from Master of Management(General?) to Master of Management (Accounting)


    Sorry for the inconvenience, Regarding my masters application application for the Master's degree I submitted in October, because , I did not meet the minimaminimum requirements for Melbourne University. entry.

    I am hoping if it is possible to switch my application from Master of Management to Master of Management (Accounting).


    I genuinely wish to study at in Melbourne University not only for its reputation of excellence but they can also provide the best for the excellent environment for education. I am an international student, having studiedcompleted a Bachelor of Business (Marketing) at Latrobe University. Although my oral and essay writing language skills isnít are not the best, I am a hardworking and am capable of achieving good results. I admire most of my friends who study at in Melbourne University, which I admire. Iíd really like to have a chance to study in Melbourne University.
    I thank you for your consideration. Should you have any further question, please do not hesitate to contact me.

    Yours Sincerely,

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