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  1. B45
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    Is this well written: We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before check-in

    Is this well written:

    We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before check-in; the apartment was clean and well kept. The location was good, only a few blocks away from the center of XJH, and that was exactly where we needed to be. Only inconvenience was the bathroom is outside of the apartment, it's actually in the hallway that leads to the stairwell, so we had to go through the main entrance in the freezing cold to use the bathroom. Other than that, everything was pretty good.
    Last edited by B45; 05-Feb-2015 at 02:51.

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    Re: Is this well written: We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before chec

    We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before check-in; the apartment was clean and well kept. The location was good, only a few blocks away from the center of XJH, and that was exactly where we needed to be. The only inconvenience was that the bathroom is was outside of the apartment. It's actually in accessible from the hallway that leads to the stairwell, so using it was somewhat of a chore, because we had to leave go out through the main entrance in the freezing cold to use the bathroom. Other than that, everything was pretty good.

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    Re: Is this well written: We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before chec

    Any other suggestions? I've rewritten the last part.

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    Re: Is this well written: We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before chec

    I would have made the same corrections as tedmc.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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