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    Election promises - Grammar check

    Could you please the check below sentences for any grammatical error?

    Delhi state assembly election to be held on 7 February 2015. Prime minister Narendra Modi(BJP) has been participated in the election rally at Rohini near Delhi for supporting his candidates.Then,He said,

    “Delhi needs polical experts for the changes and growth. This is responsibility of a nation to built it. The Congress party had been squandered for the past 15 years due to poor administrative structures. Un expectedly formed a minor party also squandered a year followed by the Congress party. It is my responsibilities to fulfill hopes and expectations for the people of Delhi. If BJP comes to power, Delhi’s growth path will make a new high”.

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    Re: Election promises - Grammar check

    The Delhi state assembly election to will be held on 7 February 2015. Prime minister Narendra Modi(BJP) has been will participated in the election rally at Rohini near Delhi for to supporting his candidates.Then,He said,

    “Delhi needs political experts for the changes and growth. This is responsibility of a nation to built facilitate them. The Congress party had been squandered (1) for the past 15 years due to poor administrative structures. An unexpectedly formed a minor party also squandered a year followed by the Congress party. It is my responsibilities responsibility to fulfill the hopes and expectations for of the people of Delhi. If BJP comes to power, Delhi’s growth path will make a new high (2)”.

    1. 'squandered' needs an object
    2. does not make sense

    not a teacher

    Last edited by tedmc; 04-Feb-2015 at 11:43.

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