As we don't say 'all the day' but 'all day'.
I think it is a comma splice, which should be replaced with a full stop or a semicolon."You are my love in my life, I want to stay with you forever."
Hello teacher,
Can I say "You are my love in my life, I want to stay with you forever."?
Is it unnatural or ungrammatical?You are my love in my life.