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  1. keannu's Avatar
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    #1

    highly effective against wrinkle

    Is the underlined natural or does it need any correction? Also I wonder if "moisturization" is more proper than "moisturizing".

    Chamomile Hand Cream with propolis is excellent for moisturizing and highly effective against wrinkle and promotes skin elasticity

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    Re: highly effective against wrinkle

    I would change that to: Chamomile Hand Cream with propolis promotes skin elasticity and is excellent for moisturizing skin and highly effective against wrinkles.

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    #3

    Re: highly effective against wrinkle

    Unless referring to a specific product by its name, I wouldn't capitalise "hand cream" in that sentence.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: highly effective against wrinkle

    This is for a specific product to be advertised, not for general ones.

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    #5

    Re: highly effective against wrinkle

    Instead of the term "against wrinkle" ,is "improvement" proper for "wrinkle"?

    Chamomile Hand Cream with propolis is excellent for moisturizing and highly effective against wrinkle and promotes skin elasticity
    => highly effective for wrinkle improvement
    Last edited by keannu; 28-Feb-2015 at 17:41.

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    Re: highly effective against wrinkle

    I think this is something like asking us to do your homework --helping you translate KO-EN, for which you will charge your client -- is that what this is?

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    Re: highly effective against wrinkle

    Someone asked me for this, but I'm not taking any commercial profit for this and it also worried me a lot. I don't translate professionally any more, I quit it a long time ago. I informed him that I can't help him any more.
    It seems it is not the right way to post this kind of question, so I will stop it. Thanks for your understanding.

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