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    Unhappy pls help me complete this para

    Moreover, the vast research facilities and opportunities at xxxx are very attracting. Research in the fields of Crashworthiness, Dynamic and active control and projects like DEEDRI, CAST, POSICOSS Moreover, the vast research facilities and opportunities at Politecnico di Milano are very attracting. Research in the fields of Crashworthiness, Dynamic and active control and projects like DEEDRI, CAST, POSICOSS....

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    Re: pls help me complete this para

    What do you mean by "Pls help me complete this para"? Do you expect us to come up with something to write after what you have written? How can we do that? We don't know anything about the subject. You appear to have simply duplicated two sentences.

    What exactly are you asking us to do?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: pls help me complete this para

    sorry I didn't notice that. the actual sentence is "Moreover, the vast research facilities and opportunities at xxxx are very attracting. Research in the fields of Crashworthiness, Dynamic and active control and projects like DEEDRI, CAST, POSICOSS" . How should I end the second sentence? I want it to mean like , these are some of the reasons I am interested in the course.


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    Re: pls help me complete this para

    Moreover, the vast research facilities and opportunities at xxxx are very attractive. This includes research in the fields of crash worthiness, dynamic and active control and projects like DEEDRI, CAST, POSICOSS. Hence, those are some of the reasons I am interested in the course.

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