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    Main details for thesis

    Here is the story. I want to write an essay to argue Johnson in the below story is stressful.
    Johnson just graduated from college and he got a management job. Within one year, he move his wife and children to a bigger house in a better neighborhood.
    I select the below topic and three main details.

    Life is stressful for a new manager because there are many difficult new issues to be handled.

    • First, Johnson has a difficult time while he is in a management position and he has no experience of it.
    • Secondly, Johnson has financial things to handle because of his need.
    • Finally, he is busy so that he doesn't have time to worry about other things.

    Are the topic and the main details proper? Would you please help me out?

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    Re: Main details for thesis

    seems ok to me

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    Re: Main details for thesis

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    It seems ok OK to me.
    Teechar, your profile says you are an English teacher. If that is the case, you should know that it is important to write in full sentences and to use correct capitalisation and punctuation. Remember that the learners here will see your profile and assume that everything you write is correct. Don't disappoint them.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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