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    Smile Interrogative sentence

    Hello everybody!

    Which one of the following sentences is correct?

    Would you have the kindness to present more details to me on the different internship projects related to organic nanoparticles so that I may choose one?

    or

    Would you have the kindness to present more details to me on the different internship projects related to organic nanoparticles? So that I may choose one.


    Thank you very much for your help.

    Best regards,
    Charles

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    Re: Interrogative sentence

    The first one is constructed correctly, with no comma and capital letter around "nanoparticles" and "so". However, the beginning is overly wordy and obsequious.

    Try "Please give me more details about the different internship programs relating to organic nanoparticles so that I can choose one".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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