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    Our past experience shape the way we look at people and world around us.

    hi there,
    please review this and tell me my mistake.


    Our past experience shape the way we look at people and world around us.


    Well, thatís true, our past experience decide how we should with the people around us. Child learns from their parent and gets the experience and that they experience in the same way they behaves with others. For example, at home if parent are rude and arrogant with their child than that child also behaves rudely with their friend and other people. And these are true with all of us. There are many of my own experience, which change my behavior and my thought about the people.

    In my childhood I was very introvert. Because at home my parent are introvert too and so I never get the experience of how to do talk. So I never mingle with other students in the school. This would change my behavior and I became the introvert person. And gradually, I lost my confidence of speaking.

    When I got in college as the part of curriculum I had given some presentation that gave me some confidence and I was started speaking with students. When other students gave me good respond then I experienced more confident in me and I was started mingling. That change the way I used to look the people.

    In masters, one of my friends cheated on me and stole my best friend by lie her about me. Then after, I donít know how, but I lost trust from all of my friends. Still now I have this thing in my heart and even I look my friends with some doubt.

    Above are some of my experiences, which change my way of behaving and looking around world.
    Last edited by nikita sonthalia; 26-Feb-2015 at 06:33.

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    Re: Our past experience shape the way we look at people and world around us.

    Is this supposed to be a personal account or an essay?

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