Nikita, you have posted 4 essays with the same useless title.
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Distance learning and online classroom learning should replace classroom learning.
Nowadays, society is changing very fast. Moreover, people priority is changing. So, from my point of view, online classroom learning should replace classroom learning.
Moreover, technology support online classroom learning and distance learning and there are many benefits of online classroom learning.
First, online classroom learning and distance learning both are working almost same as classroom learning. Online classroom learning has the conference video lecture looks almost same as classroom. There student can ask their doubts and get the answers on the spot as happened in classroom. So there is no more drawback of interaction in online class.
Second, now a days, people are become so busy that they donít have much time to attend classes because of that many people will not able to peruse there study or they have to leave there study in between. Online classroom learning and distance learning can help them to peruse their study or restart their studies. Moreover they can arrange their class according to their convenience.
Third, in classroom setting there are many students and one teacher. So teacher cannot pay attention to all the students. Therefore, many students feel left over and cannot pay attention in the class. Maybe, some student are shy and introvert and donít able to ask question in front of all the class or in-person to teacher. So, in all such situation distance learning and online classroom learning provides helpful.
Forth, as now, in school and college bulling and ganging are so common that parent are always in worry about their child. However, there are not such problems in distant and online learning.
Above there are some reason which state that classroom learning should be replace by online classroom learning and distance learning.
Last edited by nikita sonthalia; 26-Feb-2015 at 05:30.
1 - In your introduction you should set the context, provide some background and write a statement of purpose. Your introduction looks more like a conclusion!
2 - Your final body paragraph and your conclusion are a bit short.
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