Kumar Nadimuthu
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I posted one real incident happened in my life to improve my writing skills. Kindly review for any grammatical errors.
I went to Victoria Terminus (VT) station 4 years ago in Mumbai to reserve a train ticket for Chennai in the morning. An old man aged between 55 to 60 with white and gold seated adjacent to me when I was at reservation hall. He spokes fluent in English and Tamil as a native speaker.Then both of us introduced our personnel details,then he told me that he also from Chennai and came for reserve a ticket to one of his relatives. He said that he is a doctor from Chennai Appollo Hospital and came to Mumbai for special surgery. He elaborated his family background as one of his daughter studying in London and another son in Canada as a medical researchist. He also named some Bollywood about their surgery treatment and their survival because of his medical expertise.
I and my colleague attracted over his medical exposures. He gave us his business card for any help in Chennai for our family members. He also assured to serve medical cases with discount of 15 % through his influence at Appollo Hospital in Chennai,Then he informed that he wanted to move airport as his flight was scheduled at 2:00pm for Chennai.
We both decided not to miss the gentleman’s contact for any medical treatment in our family members since we believe that Appollo Hospital is one of the best medical services in Chennai. We started asking questions for our suffered childrens due to sleep apnea from both family. He replied that, “Dont worry,I will give one syrup medicines, no need to go for any other doctors and special surgery,they can recover within 2 months,the cost of medicine would be only INR 500!" He took his mobile at once and called someone to note the address to despatch the medicines through parcel service. Then he collected amount INR 500 from both and promised that medicines would be in our home before we reach at Chennai. We do not know his real face when we give money to him.
I went to Victoria Terminus (VT) station 4 years ago in Mumbai to reserve a train ticket for Chennai in the morning. An old man aged between 55 to 60 with white and gold seated adjacent to me when I was at reservation hall. He spokes fluent in English and Tamil as a native speaker.Then both of us introduced our personnel details,then he told me that he also from Chennai and came for reserve a ticket to one of his relatives. He said that he is a doctor from Chennai Appollo Hospital and came to Mumbai for special surgery. He elaborated his family background as one of his daughter studying in London and another son in Canada as a medical researchist. He also named some Bollywood about their surgery treatment and their survival because of his medical expertise.
I and my colleague attracted over his medical exposures. He gave us his business card for any help in Chennai for our family members. He also assured to serve medical cases with discount of 15 % through his influence at Appollo Hospital in Chennai,Then he informed that he wanted to move airport as his flight was scheduled at 2:00pm for Chennai.
We both decided not to miss the gentleman’s contact for any medical treatment in our family members since we believe that Appollo Hospital is one of the best medical services in Chennai. We started asking questions for our suffered childrens due to sleep apnea from both family. He replied that, “Dont worry,I will give one syrup medicines, no need to go for any other doctors and special surgery,they can recover within 2 months,the cost of medicine would be only INR 500!" He took his mobile at once and called someone to note the address to despatch the medicines through parcel service. Then he collected amount INR 500 from both and promised that medicines would be in our home before we reach at Chennai. We do not know his real face when we give money to him.
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