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    #1

    a good story as well as understable/a good as well as understable story

    Hi,

    1- That was a good story as well as understable.
    2- That was a good story as well as a understable story.
    3- That was a good as well as understable story.

    I have difficulty in determing which one to take. I think sentence one is OK for me. And I am not sure about the second one. The third one is bad. What do you think?

    Thanks.

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    Re: a good story as well as understable/a good as well as understable story

    They are all overly wordy. "That story was good and understandable" or "That was a good, understandable story".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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