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  1. Tarheel's Avatar
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    #11

    Re: could anyone help me to check my writing ? 6

    If you can't afford to pay for something it is OK to steal it?

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    #12

    Re: could anyone help me to check my writing ? 6

    Quote Originally Posted by Vincen't Wong View Post
    Many companies claimed that they lost much money because of the phenomenon of illegal download.
    Say:

    Many companies claim that they have lost money because of illegal downloading.


  3. teechar's Avatar
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    #13

    Re: could anyone help me to check my writing ? 6

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    1. A person has to be convicted of something.
    The suspect was convicted but later released.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    2. You can't have many musics.
    Here's your comma:
    "... because he uploaded many movies, and music ..."

  4. Vincen't Wong's Avatar
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    #14

    Re: could anyone help me to check my writing ? 6

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    The suspect was convicted but later released.


    Here's your comma:
    "... because he uploaded many movies, and music ..."
    Thanks for your kindly help again!
    Actually i am not a rich guy so i can't afford the tutorial fee of hiring a teacher.
    Posting writings here is my only way to improve my immature english skills
    it means a lot to me! thank you!

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    #15

    Re: could anyone help me to check my writing ? 6

    Quote Originally Posted by Vincen't Wong View Post
    Posting my writings here is my only way to improve my immature English language skills.
    It means a lot to me! Thank you!
    You're doing a good job, and you're very welcome.

    Keep going.

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