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    Could you please check this passage? Nowadays with consider of increasing the populat

    Could you please check this passage?
    Nowadays with consider of increasing the population in the whole different parts of the world and with notice the increasingly needs of humanity to energy, transportation, residency, and etc. they want produce more and more facility and their welfare.

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    Re: Could you please check this passage? Nowadays with consider of increasing the pop

    The sentence is not understandable. Please try again.

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    Re: Could you please check this passage? Nowadays with consider of increasing the pop

    Is this what you are trying to say:

    With the increase in the world population, there is the corresponding increase in the demand for energy, transport, housing, etc and hence the need to build the facilities to provide for the demand.

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    Re: Could you please check this passage? Nowadays with consider of increasing the pop

    Ted, why not give the OP an opportunity to respond?

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    Re: Could you please check this passage? Nowadays with consider of increasing the pop

    Thanks .
    yes that is something like the thing you wrote.I want to say with increase the population in the world we need the system to produce the energy and etc.

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