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    Pitch presentation

    Hi. I'm writing presentation for the pitch. Could you please check for grammar mistakes.

    Did you know? There is more than 1 500 000 people worldwide who breeds more than 800 different breeds of pigeons?
    They are organized in associations, leagues/alliances and clubs.
    We are going to take 10% of each sold pigeon via auctions. At least 2 big auctions are held per year.
    What do we need the money for? To gather pigeon fancier elite to partner up with us. The benefits are: becoming much more influential and creating powerful brand

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    Re: Pitch presentation

    Did Do you know? There is that there are more than 1 500 000 people worldwide who breeds more than 800 different breeds of pigeons?

    They are organized in from associations, leagues/alliances and clubs.
    We are going to take 10% of the proceeds from each sold pigeon sold via auctions. At least 2 two big auctions are held per year.
    What do we need the money for? To gather pigeon fancier elite (?? enthusiasts?) to partner up with us. The benefits are: becoming much more influential and creating a powerful brand.

    not a teacher

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