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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Question May you please check my grammar

    this is my message in my shout out in my facebook account

    I FELT SOOOO UNDERWHELMED THIS AFTERNOON!!! HOW I WISHED I HAD BEEN GIVEN THE TIME TO SPEAK FOR A VERY IMPORTANT MATTER IN CONNECTION TO THE AGENDA... IF IT WAS NOT ONLY BECAUSE OF "YOU" I COULD HAVE BEEN AWAKENING THEIR MINDS.

    does my line "
    I COULD HAVE BEEN AWAKENING THEIR MINDS" correct? please check my words.

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    Re: May you please check my grammar

    What a strange idea! You mean it's common for people to shout at strangers from their Facebook page now?
    Don't forget to use capitals where they should go - at the start of a sentence. And remember that a full stop is needed at the end.

    "I FELT SO OOO UNDERWHELMED THIS AFTERNOON! !! HOW I WISHED I HAD BEEN GIVEN THE TIME TO SPEAK FOR about A VERY IMPORTANT MATTER IN CONNECTION TO with THE AGENDA. IF IT WAS (were) NOT ONLY BECAUSE OF FOR YOU, I COULD HAVE BEEN AWAKENING THEIR MINDS."

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    Re: May you please check my grammar

    Thank you very much for your help

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