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    Post school farewell party welcome address, please corret it for my son

    Respected Principal, all teachers, students, and my dear friends, a warm good morning to all of you,

    Looking back through the past years , this school has been my second home, and it’s really hard to talk about 7 years of memories in one short speech. Now that we’re all here today, officially saying Goodbye to this school, our teachers & to each other . This past year, I have had the honour of being the head boy of this prestigious School. I take immense pride in the fact that everyone has shown so much faith in me. All my teachers, every single one of them has played an important role in bringing me where I am today. Always ready to help, academics or otherwise, you are an integral part of me and I thank you for being there when I needed you. The experience which I have had here is more memorable. As far as I know, I have to say that, this school is the best school I've ever gone.
    Actually, It is very sad for me now that I realize I will never be coming back here again. Today is the day we leave this school. Today is the day we say goodbye. I hope that all of you will get great success in your future

    Now I come to my assignment of welcome address
    I have great Pleasure in welcoming Leela mam to this solemn function, I welcome you,
    I have immense pleasure in welcoming all teachers, students and staffs, I welcome one and all to this function.

    Thank you,

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    Re: school farewell party welcome address, please corret it for my son

    Quote Originally Posted by akshara585 View Post
    Respected principal, teachers, students, and dear friends, a warm good morning to all of you,

    Looking back through the past years, this school has been my second home, and it’s really hard to talk about 7 years of memories in one short speech. Now that we’re all here today, [let us/I will]officially say goodbye to this school, our teachers and to each other. This past year, I have had the honour of being the head boy of this prestigious school. I take immense pride in the fact that everyone has shown so much faith in me. All my teachers, every single one of them has played an important role in bringing me where I am today. Always ready to help, academics or otherwise, you are an integral part of me and I thank you for being there when I needed you. The experience which I have had here is more memorable. As far as I know, I have to say that, this school is the best school I've ever went to.
    Actually, it is very sad for me now that I realize I will never be coming back again. Today is the day I leave this school. Today is the day we say goodbye. I hope that all of you will have great success in your future.

    Now I come to my assignment of welcome address (Consider Revising)

    I have great pleasure in welcoming Leela mam to this solemn function, I welcome you (Consider Revising)
    I have immense pleasure in welcoming all teachers, students and staffs, I welcome one and all to this function.

    Thank you.
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