manishasilva
New member
- Joined
- Mar 12, 2015
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Sinhalese
- Home Country
- Sri Lanka
- Current Location
- Sri Lanka
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If I have a chance, I would like to complete my master’s degree with Korean Government Scholarship Program and would like to show my gratitude towards them by giving my service to that county for about considerable time period. Then after I would like to return my mother land and would like to distribute new found insight and knowledge among my people and give my country a better service than before.
If I have a chance, I would like to complete my master’s degree with Korean Government Scholarship Program and would like to show my gratitude towards them by giving my service to that county for about considerable time period. Then after I would like to return my mother land and would like to distribute new found insight and knowledge among my people and give my country a better service than before.