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    Please check out my script of a U-tube scene.

    Please check out my script of a U-tube scene.

    This script is the first two sentence from a scene where a lioness was maimed the butting of a rhinoceros. I can’t make out the first undrelined part, and I am not so sure about the second , ‘lured.’ Can you check out my script and make it complete for me?



    Shocking Video of a Cape Buffalo Attacking a Lioness

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?list=P...cqLQrzFo8#t=45

    “Mesmerized by the **** feast the rhinos is lured into a deadly pursuit. Without backup a lone rhinos is no match for the angriest beast on the savannah.”

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    Re: Please check out my script of a U-tube scene.

    Quote Originally Posted by andypassword View Post
    Please check out my script of a U-tube scene.

    This script is the first two sentence from a scene where a lioness was maimed the butting of a rhinoceros. I can’t make out the first undrelined part, and I am not so sure about the second , ‘lured.’ Can you check out my script and make it complete for me?



    Shocking Video of a Cape Buffalo Attacking a Lioness

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?list=P...cqLQrzFo8#t=45

    “Mesmerized by the moving feast, the lioness is lured into a deadly pursuit. Without backup a lone lioness is no match for the angriest beast on the savannah.”


    Hope that helps.
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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    Re: Please check out my script of a U-tube scene.

    I would not be surprised to find that there were young buffalo in the area.

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    Re: Please check out my script of a U-tube scene.

    Thanks a lot, Grumpy.
    Thanks a million.

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    Re: Please check out my script of a U-tube scene.

    There is no need to write a new post to say "Thank you". Simply click on the "Thank" button which appears in the bottom left-hand corner of any post you find helpful. It saves time for everyone.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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