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Correction not-from-a-teacher as follows:
People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Agree or disagree?
Our lives is full of desirable and enjoyable things, but it also has things that we do not enjoy doing and although we always want to avoid doing the things we don’t like, we have to do them, in order to be successful in life and have another perspective and tolerance. So, I agree with the statement that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
As an example, being a high school student is very hard for us because every day we have to take classes which we don’t like. [For me, I don't like history and chemistry but I have to put up with it.](2) Why are we taking these courses? The answer is basic: in order to finish high school and then go to a college to have a job that will shape standards for our lives(3). So one way or another, I feel a necessity to learn them because even though I do not enjoy having them in my life, I have to do them in an attempt to be successful in life.
Second, everyone in the world has different tastes, for example someone could enjoy doing things that I do not enjoy doing. In(4) my opinion, one should always think emphatically when they do things that they do not enjoy doing, because if the one understands the feeling that the others have when they are doing it, it would improve the feeling of tolerance and it gives him another perspective. Thus, people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
So since life is not always giving us the things we enjoy doing, we should learn to do the things we do not like in order to be successful in life and gain tolerance and another perspective about things.
1. Give spaces between paragraphs.
2. You may edit this sentence to how you like it.
3. Since you wrote 'we' in the last sentence ("Why are we taking these courses?"), you should keep including yourself inside the conversation since you seemed to do so from the first word of your essay.
4. The sentence was a run-on. It was too long.
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