Student or Learner
Can you please help me !!! i need to send this letter today asap
I am A.V.B the 1st year student of xxx of Natural Sciences .
I have always been thinking about my future and about the career that i want to follow and generally my own path in life.
Almost all my family have their jobs related to medicine and technology. I have grown among intelligent people and since early childhood i have learnt about the importance of education .
Teachers at my school noticed that i had good abilities in subjects such as bioinformatics , physics and biology .
This increased my interest in sciences and particularity in technology.
To pursue my goal i accomplished some minor objectives such as : graduated from high school among the best students in the school and city . I got accepted in the xxx of Natural Sciences to study biotechnology .
the first acquaintance with your university began when a friend of mine suggested me to apply to xxx .
After i heard about it i started to collect some particular information about xxx .
From the data i had found i managed to list some basic reasons why i chose it .
Regarding to information technology with its fully equipped classrooms and highly qualified professors xxx is one of the most serious universities in Balkan Peninsula . xxx links its activity with practical work and at the same time it develops the entrepreneurial skills of its students , is the main reason why i desire to study here .
As regards my interests I'm glad to say that i'm not a person who is always focused in studies .
I participate in a lot of activities in my free time .
I'm also part of an engineering organization where I'm an active part of it . I'm in the marketing and the IT department of this organization and i can say that i have some experience in the technology field .
In my big love for sports i would like to mention that i play tennis and football . I'm a real football fan and i also love to watch it . Finally i can't forget that i reading books is another passion of mine and i spent a lot of time reading .
With respect to my future career , as i mentioned before xxx university links its practical work and helps students to use their skills . My home-country suffers the lack of highly educated specialists in the field of information and technology .
Furthermore as a user i'm not pleased with the level of services that are offered by information technology offices that are also extremely expensive .
If i gain the bachelor degrees in your university then i'm going to return in my homeland where i will make efforts to establish my own information technology company providing high technological services for the inhabitants of my home country .
To implement my goal i need to acquire special knowledge in chosen field of education and improve my leadership qualities and that will be possible if i join xxxx university .
In conclusion , I would like to say that if i became student of your university , I promise to be hard-working and an active member of the team .
thank you so much for considering my application . I look forward to your positive response .
yours Sincerely , A.V.B
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