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    Angry Motivational letter for college

    Can you please help me !!! i need to send this letter today asap


    I am A.V.B the 1st year student of xxx of Natural Sciences .


    I have always been thinking about my future and about the career that i want to follow and generally my own path in life.


    Almost all my family have their jobs related to medicine and technology. I have grown among intelligent people and since early childhood i have learnt about the importance of education .


    Teachers at my school noticed that i had good abilities in subjects such as bioinformatics , physics and biology .
    This increased my interest in sciences and particularity in technology.


    To pursue my goal i accomplished some minor objectives such as : graduated from high school among the best students in the school and city . I got accepted in the xxx of Natural Sciences to study biotechnology .


    the first acquaintance with your university began when a friend of mine suggested me to apply to xxx .
    After i heard about it i started to collect some particular information about xxx .


    From the data i had found i managed to list some basic reasons why i chose it .


    Regarding to information technology with its fully equipped classrooms and highly qualified professors xxx is one of the most serious universities in Balkan Peninsula . xxx links its activity with practical work and at the same time it develops the entrepreneurial skills of its students , is the main reason why i desire to study here .
    As regards my interests I'm glad to say that i'm not a person who is always focused in studies .
    I participate in a lot of activities in my free time .
    I'm also part of an engineering organization where I'm an active part of it . I'm in the marketing and the IT department of this organization and i can say that i have some experience in the technology field .
    In my big love for sports i would like to mention that i play tennis and football . I'm a real football fan and i also love to watch it . Finally i can't forget that i reading books is another passion of mine and i spent a lot of time reading .


    With respect to my future career , as i mentioned before xxx university links its practical work and helps students to use their skills . My home-country suffers the lack of highly educated specialists in the field of information and technology .
    Furthermore as a user i'm not pleased with the level of services that are offered by information technology offices that are also extremely expensive .
    If i gain the bachelor degrees in your university then i'm going to return in my homeland where i will make efforts to establish my own information technology company providing high technological services for the inhabitants of my home country .


    To implement my goal i need to acquire special knowledge in chosen field of education and improve my leadership qualities and that will be possible if i join xxxx university .


    In conclusion , I would like to say that if i became student of your university , I promise to be hard-working and an active member of the team .
    thank you so much for considering my application . I look forward to your positive response .
    yours Sincerely , A.V.B

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    Re: Motivational letter for college

    If you are in a hurry, then you had better go to a pay site for help. I only have the time I have, and there are a couple of dozen people with questions that haven't been answered yet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Alexathedutch View Post
    Can you please help me !!! i need to send this letter today asap
    Please do not space before commas, periods, semicolons, etc.


    Quote Originally Posted by Alexathedutch View Post
    I am A.V.B, a 1st year student of xxx of Natural Sciences.
    If "Natural Sciences" is the name of the course, then go ahead and capitalize it. Otherwise, no.


    Quote Originally Posted by Alexathedutch View Post
    I have always been thinking about my future and about the career path that I want to take.

    It is possible to make your paragraphs too short.



    Quote Originally Posted by Alexathedutch View Post
    Almost everybody in my family has jobs related to medicine or medical technology. I have grown up among intelligent people and, since early childhood I have learned about the importance of education.



    Quote Originally Posted by Alexathedutch View Post
    Teachers at my school noticed that I had good abilities in subjects such as bioinformatics, physics and biology.
    This increased my interest in science and particularity in technology.
    The word you are looking for is aptitude.



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