averagely vs. on average

Status
Not open for further replies.

Noot

Member
Joined
Nov 14, 2014
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
Germany
Hi, I'm proof-reading an article that contains the first sentence. My first reaction was to replace sentence number one with sentence number 3. But I'm wondering whether the term 'averagely' could in fact be used in this sense. If it can, then I would tend towards the formulation in the second example. Could someone please tell me whether the first and second sentences are correct ? Thanks!

1. The women averagely give birth to three children.
2. The women give birth to averagely three children.
3. The women give birth on average to three children.
 

tedmc

VIP Member
Joined
Apr 16, 2014
Member Type
Interested in Language
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Malaysia
Current Location
Malaysia
1. The women, averagely, give birth to three children.
2. The women give birth to, averagely, three children.
3. The women give birth, on the average, to three children.

You need commas and "the" as shown.

not a teacher
 

emsr2d2

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Jul 28, 2009
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
UK
I was actually surprised to find "averagely" in the dictionary. I have never seen it or used it. "On the average" is incorrect. I would change the word order and use "On average, the women give birth to three children". This assumes that the reader knows who "the women" are - it must refer to a particular set of women which has been pre-defined.
If you remove "the", it would refer to all the women in the world.
 

Noot

Member
Joined
Nov 14, 2014
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
Germany
Thanks very much for both replies. I too was surprised to find the word "averagely" in the dictionary. That's why my initial reaction was to change it to "on average". The example above sounds best to me: "On average, the women give birth to three children". That's really helpful, thanks so much.
 

MikeNewYork

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
I don't think "averagely" is used much.
 

MikeNewYork

VIP Member
Joined
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States

Roman55

Key Member
Joined
Feb 5, 2014
Member Type
Interested in Language
Native Language
British English
Home Country
Italy
Current Location
France
I am not a teacher.

I had almost forgotten about the word 'averagely' until I came across this thread.
I was on the point of agreeing with emsr2d2, before it came back to me, because the word seemed so out of place in this context.

In fact, it is used to mean 'reasonably' or, 'good to middling' as in 'He's an averagely good singer, but an excellent song writer.'
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top