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  1. Zateey
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    Short script( Is my sentences correct?)

    Short script (Are my sentences correct?)


    T: Mom..
    P: Oh here you are..
    T: Why did you put the TV and computer outside?
    P: Give me your phone and I will tell you..
    T: Okay...but for what?
    P: Because I want to sell them.
    T: What?! Do you want to sell them and also my phone?!
    P: Yes I want to sell them.
    T: No mom if you take my phone how can I text my friends? How can I take a selfie with them?
    P: This is for your good sake my dear..You know what?! I just read a newspaper, and it was about the effects of media.
    Last edited by Zateey; 20-Mar-2015 at 07:26.

  2. MikeNewYork's Avatar
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    Re: Short script( Is my sentences correct?)

    Your title should be:
    Are my sentences correct? There should be a space after "script" but not before "is".

    Most of your sentences are incorrect. Please start each sentence with a capital latter and correct your punctuation and spacing. After you edit your post, we can comment.

  3. Zateey
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    Re: Short script( Is my sentences correct?)

    I am so sorry. I already edit my post so can you help me?☺
    Thank you so much.

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    Re: Short script( Is my sentences correct?)

    Thanks for the edit. It is much better. You have used too many ellipses for my taste, but because this is supposed to be a transcript, you can probably get away with it. And, you should know that an ellipsis is three dots, not two.

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