Oussama Zema
New member
- Joined
- Mar 19, 2015
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Algeria
- Current Location
- Algeria
hello , i hope you are doing fine . recently i have written an essay for a scholarship but since i am not a good writer i would like to post it here
in order to get feedback and correction if necessary . here it is
If you have never experienced the storm, how could you enjoy the beauty of the rainbow? If one has never experienced the unknown, how could one enjoy the joy that life has to offer? Therefore I always welcome new experiences in my life.
I believe that the XXXX program is both a unique opportunity and a life changing experience. First of all, the well-known reputation and the high quality of the program attracting highly motivated students, incited me to apply .In addition the testimonies of the previous experienced grant holders, having enjoyed such an unmatched cultural experience, motivated me most. Furthermore the desire for excellence and the passion to network and meet inspiring people with different thoughts and ideas, led me to understand the needs to share and develop my entrepreneurial outlook.
Finally, by joying this program, I hope to enhance my personal and communications skills, gain the necessary tools to overcome difficulties and shape my future career and make positive impact on society.
in order to get feedback and correction if necessary . here it is
If you have never experienced the storm, how could you enjoy the beauty of the rainbow? If one has never experienced the unknown, how could one enjoy the joy that life has to offer? Therefore I always welcome new experiences in my life.
I believe that the XXXX program is both a unique opportunity and a life changing experience. First of all, the well-known reputation and the high quality of the program attracting highly motivated students, incited me to apply .In addition the testimonies of the previous experienced grant holders, having enjoyed such an unmatched cultural experience, motivated me most. Furthermore the desire for excellence and the passion to network and meet inspiring people with different thoughts and ideas, led me to understand the needs to share and develop my entrepreneurial outlook.
Finally, by joying this program, I hope to enhance my personal and communications skills, gain the necessary tools to overcome difficulties and shape my future career and make positive impact on society.