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    #1

    The tiger approached me, he wanted to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS

    The tiger was walking to close to me..VS

    The tiger was very close to me,just a little bit near to me...

    Which one possible?

    Are three sentences correct?

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    #2

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    Oh my God! The tiger is approaching me; it wants to eat me!

    The tiger was getting too close to me when the ranger scared it away.

    The tiger was very close to me; just a short distance away.

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    #3

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    The semicolon in your third response is incorrect. Use a comma or a dash.

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    #4

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    I disagree with you.

    The stories were just beginning now.

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    #5

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    You disagree with whom? You used the past tense in 2 of your 3 sentences.

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    #6

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    You disagree with whom? You used the past tense in 2 of your 3 sentences.
    I disagree with you.

    The No.1 should be "The tiger approached me, he wanted to eat me..."

    It happened in the past years. I mean three sentences.

    Am I wrong?

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    #7

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    If sentence #1 should be "The tiger approached me. He wanted to eat me" because it happened in the past (or "a few years ago", but not "It happened in the past years"), why did you write "The tiger approach (sic) me, he wants to eat me" in post #1?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #8

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    It's my careless mistake.

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    #9

    Re: The tiger approach me, he wants to eat me...VS The tiger was walking to close to

    You seem to make a lot of those. Try to read what you've written very carefully before you actually post and make sure they say what you mean.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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