Results 1 to 2 of 2
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Slovak
      • Home Country:
      • Slovak Republic
      • Current Location:
      • Slovak Republic

    • Join Date: Mar 2015
    • Posts: 1
    #1

    Resume Grammar

    Hi everyone, so I am working on my resume and I came across two problems:
    1. this phrase:
    - Excellent hospitality and food and beverage serving skills
    2. this phrase:
    - Well-versed in providing passengers or clients with constant attention and a safe and comfortable experience
    I am not really sure about the phrasing/ word order/ verb use (in case of no.2)
    Can you please tell me if they make sense? And if they don't how would you change them?
    Thanks in advance.

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Chinese
      • Home Country:
      • Malaysia
      • Current Location:
      • Malaysia

    • Join Date: Apr 2014
    • Posts: 3,329
    #2

    Re: Resume Grammar

    1. excellent food and beverage serving skills (F&B is a subset of hospitality)

    2. experienced in providing premier/personalized customer services

    not a teacher

Similar Threads

  1. Creating resume, please assist with grammar/punctuation. (especially coma usage)
    By caseydf92 in forum CVs, Resumes and Applications
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 21-Jun-2014, 12:55
  2. Replies: 0
    Last Post: 21-Jun-2014, 12:55
  3. [General] Please tell him thank you for help on my resume.
    By Luke Lee in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 29-Oct-2013, 04:25
  4. Resume
    By asad hussain in forum CVs, Resumes and Applications
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 28-May-2007, 01:07
  5. resume and cv
    By adorer52 in forum CVs, Resumes and Applications
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 20-Oct-2004, 09:53

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •