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    Please Check is it correct.

    I have write an email to HR team, Is it correct?. If any errors in it then please tell what is a correct and how.It is just for knowing how much I am improving my writing skill. Thank you for your reading my Post.

    Dear Human resource Team,


    I Would like to thanks to you for arranging my seminar and providing us a great platform for improving our communication skill. It is very great opportunity for me to express my views on the topic "Population". I have attached my power point presentation file to this mail, Please check it. If any changes needed in it, then let me know, I will correct it. I will come to the seminar hall on Saturday at 10.30 am.


    Thanks and my regards,
    aa

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    Re: Please Check is it correct.

    I have write written an email to HR team. Is it correct?. If there are any errors in it then please tell what is a correct and how correct them for me. It is just for knowing how much I am improving my writing skill(?). Thank you for your reading my post.

    Dear Human resource Team,

    I would like to thanks to you for arranging my the seminar and providing us a great platform for improving our communication skills. It is very great opportunity for me to express my views on the topic "Population". I have attached my Powerpoint presentation file to this mail.

    Please check it. If
    there are any changes needed in it, then please let me know. I will correct it. I will come to the seminar hall on Saturday at 10.30 am.

    not a teacher

  2. aju India's Avatar
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    Re: Please Check is it correct.

    for improving our communication skills.

    for improving my communication skill.

    Is it correct?.

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    Re: Please Check is it correct.

    Skills, plural. Speaking, writing, planning, presenting, listening... All skills.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Please Check is it correct.

    Even with writing alone, it is 'writing skills' (plural), which is logical because there are more than one aspect of writing to learn.

    'My' or 'our' depends on what you want to say.

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    Re: Please Check is it correct.

    Thank you, Now I understand what you want to say.Thank you very much.

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    Re: Please Check is it correct.

    I moved your post on an unrelated topic to its own thread in the Ask a Teacher section.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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