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    #1

    apartment

    Please correct if necessary.

    The original file of your new apartment has sent back to Taj for transferring in your name. I will inform you, once I have received after transferring.

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    #2

    Re: apartment

    I don't what "the file of your new apartment" means.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: apartment

    A friend of mine has purchased an apartment and has gone to abroad for 7 days before transfer the property to his name . He asked me to send the his apartment's lease documents to his broker for transfer/lease. I hope you understand what I am trying to write.
    Last edited by meela; 26-Mar-2015 at 06:58.

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    Re: apartment

    You still have not explained what "the file of the apartment" is about.
    What is your role? Are you assuming the role of a lawyer representing your friend?
    A broker does not handle transfer of ownership. Who is Taj? You have not explained the situation clearly.

    Correction (just for grammar)
    The original file (land title?) of your new apartment has been sent back to Taj for transferring in your name. I will inform you(,) once I have received (what?) after transferring. the transfer.

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    #5

    Re: apartment

    meela, in two posts you have incorrectly added 'the' before possessive adjectives:

    'I sent the my car...'

    'He asked me to send the his apartment's lease documents...'

    I'm sensing a trend here.

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