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    Hi friends,

    Is the following sentence correct grammatically. If it is not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.

    *As shown in fig .10, the turbine almost stalls after flow coefficient of 0.25.

    *According to ref[4], another reason of high entropy generation is due to a region of reversed flow at near blade hub in the suction surface.

    Note that there is hob blade in suction surface of the blade.

    Thanks for your help.

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    #2

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    Please state the source of your quoted text and name the author to satisfy copyright requirements.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
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    hi, thanks

    These sentences are my own. But, with the help of the following article and myself grammatical Information.

    http://www.sciencedirect.com/science...96890412000519

    Stall where is in the figure that efficiency reduced very much.

    thanks for your help.

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    #4

    Re: right sentences

    Ali, this is an English forum, not an engineering forum.

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    Re: right sentences

    Hi my dear friends,

    please Forgive me for my questions, but some sentences are not quite technical. I think that you can guide me, However, I did not have bad intentions.

    Is location of (almost) in the following sentence correct?

    the turbine almost stalls after flow coefficient of 0.25.

    thanks for your help.

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    Re: right sentences

    I deem it correct to put 'almost' before the verb it modifies.
    Does your sentence mean 'The turbine almost stalls after the flow coefficient reaches 0.25'?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ali_dd View Post
    *According to ref[4], another reason for high entropy generation is due to a region of reversed flow at near the blade hub in the suction surface.
    We don't say "The reason is due to ..." We do say, "The reason is ..."
    "The flood was due to heavy rainfall." Yes
    "The reason for the flood was heavy rainfall." Yes
    "The reason for the flood was due to heavy rainfall". No

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    #8

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    "Almost stalls" seems like a strange concept to me. Wouldn't it be more useful to say at what flow coefficient the turbine actually stalls?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    "Almost stalls" seems like a strange concept to me. Wouldn't it be more useful to say at what flow coefficient the turbine actually stalls?
    hi, thanks for all of friends.

    Sorry, my English language is not very interesting.

    in fact, When the flow coefficient is greater than 0.25, turbine efficiency decrease. this Event say (turbine stall).

    but, here, "stall" is a verb,

    Now, I want to say that "the turbine almost stalls after flow coefficient of 0.25."

    Is the up sentence correct grammatically....If it is not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer!!!

    thans for your help,,

    ali

    best

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    #10

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    'The turbine will almost stall when the flow coefficient exceeds 0.25.'

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