Punkchickengirl
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Hi all,
I hope somebody might guide me a little bit with the below. I think I'm doing well with figuring out clause division, then I look at what I've done and feel ignorant, panic and wonder whether it's all wrong.
Lines 12 -18 I'm having particular worries about, and I hope someone might help illuminate where the boundaries might better go and why?
Thank you for reading!
punkchicken
when forces were facing significant cash savings”. ||
I hope somebody might guide me a little bit with the below. I think I'm doing well with figuring out clause division, then I look at what I've done and feel ignorant, panic and wonder whether it's all wrong.
Lines 12 -18 I'm having particular worries about, and I hope someone might help illuminate where the boundaries might better go and why?
Thank you for reading!
punkchicken
- ||MUGGINGS have shot up by 6% over the last year despite a general fall in
- crime.||
- ||Robberies were also up by 2% and cases of domestic violence by 6%|| as the
- recession continued to take its toll[ among women forced to stay in abusive
- relationships.] ||
- ||Javed Khan, of Victim Support, said|| crime was still “a real problem for a lot of
- people”. || He said: || “Many victims still need help to cope after a crime.” ||
- ||Shadow Police Minister David Hanson added: || “Cutting 15,000 police officers
- shows|| the Government are not doing everything they can.” ||
- ||Overall crime fell by 6%, with murder cases down 14% and attempted murder
- by 12%||, according to the Office for National Statistics. ||
- ||The Government said|| the figures showed || people had “the lowest chance of being
- a victim” in more than 30 years. ||
- Crime Prevention Minister Jeremy Browne said|| it proved || that “how the police
- are deployed, rather than their numbers, is the key to cutting crime”. ||
- ||Deputy Chief Constable Douglas Paxton, of the Association of Chief Police
- Officers, praised officers on the beat “for the overall crime reductions || at a time
when forces were facing significant cash savings”. ||