Student or Learner
1. for window phones:
It’s the only phone with Live Tiles that bring information and updates right to the surface, so you stay closer to the people and things that matter.
2. for pc window:
Surface with Windows 8 Pro is all new, and yet you can do everything you’ve ever done on your PC. Touch-enhanced applications run as smoothly as your favourite desktop software, so you can work the way you want.
It’s got game. And a whole lot more.
Please help me with the best alternate edited version of the above
Thanks in advance
You seem to have ignored the fact that I closed your last thread because you told us that this rewriting of advertising literature is an assignment for your teacher. Don't keep trying to get us to do your homework.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.