can we edit this paragraph

[jswarraich]

1. for window phones:
It’s the only phone with Live Tiles that bring information and updates right to the surface, so you stay closer to the people and things that matter.

2. for pc window:
Surface with Windows 8 Pro is all new, and yet you can do everything you’ve ever done on your PC. Touch-enhanced applications run as smoothly as your favourite desktop software, so you can work the way you want.

3.for game:

It’s got game. And a whole lot more. Please help me with the best alternate edited version of the above Thanks in advance

 

[emsr2d2]

You seem to have ignored the fact that I closed your last thread because you told us that this rewriting of advertising literature is an assignment for your teacher. Don't keep trying to get us to do your homework.