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    #1

    Help me find error in next text.

    Was be 2004 year. Yandex was doing ads on russian TV. More peoples want create websites on Yandex Free Site Host site is "Metallica fan site".
    My step was be:
    1)Create site "metallica fan site" o a free blog hosting of Yandex at 2004 year..now is a ucoz).
    2)Add site to index,,al pages of site add to index. Pages : "video","photo","links","history of music group".and other. add to index of Yandex search results.
    3)increase position of Yandex to top10 with query "metallica fan site".
    OOPS...site was give 4k visitor at the 1 mounth!!!!! Greate news...was be 2005 year..and i have 4k visitors every mounth.
    4)I was add shop to my site and start selling clothes of "Metallica".
    5) mail of Russia sending post to more cities and give me 200$ ROI every mouth.

    Cool! At 2005 year I was have every mounth 200$.
    At 2006 year i quit doingou for reading this post.
    Last edited by pows; 31-Mar-2015 at 16:19. Reason: Bare link deleted. (Then another mod put the text into black)

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    #2

    Re: Help me find error in next text.

    Pows, your post is almost impossible to deal with. It's not in sentences. It was posted in yellow (so it was unreadable) but I've changed it to black. There are multiple spelling errors and lots of spaces missing between words. We don't end sentences with multiple full stops. One is enough. Please edit your text so that the sentences are clear and check all the spelling.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: Help me find error in next text.

    I fix text,too.

    Sorry, buy i want know which error i doing, when i writing in english.

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    #4

    Re: Help me find error in next text.

    Did you write the original text yourself?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: Help me find error in next text.

    emsr2d2, Yeah..All text was writed from my mind. Different words I was get from translate.google.com
    Last edited by pows; 31-Mar-2015 at 16:14.

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    #6

    Re: Help me find error in next text.

    Google Translate is very inefficient unless you are translating short, easy phrases. In post #6, you have forgotten to use correct capitalisation again. We need to see some hard work from you before we can help you.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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