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    Please edit it if required

    Itís the only phone with Live Tiles that bring information and updates right to the surface, so you stay closer to the people and things that matter.

    Thanks in advance

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    Re: Please edit it if required

    I believe that that is the official tagline/slogan of the Windows Phone brand. Why would you want to edit it? Also, in future, you must quote the source of anything you post if you did not write it yourself.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please edit it if required

    It's my class assignment related to advertising, where we need to edit the copy and make it little different..keeping the core message same

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    Re: Please edit it if required

    We don't help with homework. Your teacher is not interested in how well we can write English. It's your homework. You must do it alone. Do the best job you can and when you get your assignment back from your teacher, you can come back to us if there are any corrections of comments you don't understand.

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