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  1. Newbie
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    Post please help me with this essay

    Finance is a tough puzzle that is need to be solved. To be an adult, there are many item which you have to pay. So many people want to be success and earn much money to live well. Some take school course, some ask for advice and they all head to the same goal which is to become financially successful. For my point of view, I consider that hard working, visionary, specialize knowledge and good communication skills are some of many qualities of a prosperous businessman.

    The first characteristic I want to consider is hard working. Hard work is the key to the success and there is no substitute for it for an businessman. He need to work hard consistently and persistently towards the never-ending goal of excellence. When one dedicated to his work, he will motivate his employees to work with the same zeal. It is like one of Barack Obama quotes: ďIf you're walking down the right path and you're willing to keep walking, eventually you'll make progress.Ē. One just need to keep working and there will be a prize waiting for him at the end of the road.

    Everyone has all the capabilities to move forward, just not everyone able to see it. That lead to my second point, one need to be a visionary. The market changes everyday so the businessman need to have a good foresight to know about future business environment. He well visualize the likely changes of the market, consumer attitude, technological developments etc. and take timely actions accordingly. The changing business world demands dynamism in the businessman. So good businessman should be able to adjust himself according to the necessities of the situations.

    Finally, the businessman should have a thorough understanding of his business. He need to be clear about the aims and objectives of the organization. The knowledge of business should be supplemented by the knowledge of trade, finance, marketing, mercantile laws. The knowledge of all these aspects is essential to tackle complex business problems. In addition, successful businessman usually have his own method that lead to success. So he must be able to guard his business secrets from the leakage to competitors.

    In a word, to be a successful businessman is not an easy thing, but with a lot of effort, each businessman can reach up to the success from day to day. From what I have stated above, I truly believe that those skills will help you to become a successful businessman.

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    Re: please help me with this essay

    What is the purpose of your essay? What are you going to do with it when it's ready?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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